17 April 2010
Thursday, April 22, 2010
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Welcoming April
I'm welcoming April with all it's blessing days
to make my age shine in silver glow...
to make my age shine in silver glow...
Monday, March 22, 2010
Sing a long...
Who'll Stop The Rain
Artist/Band: Creedence Clearwater Revival
Album: Cosmo's Factory
Long as I remember The rain been comin' down.
Clouds of myst'ry pourin' Confusion on the ground.
Good men through the ages, Tryin' to find the sun;
And I wonder, Still I wonder, Who'll stop the rain.
I went down Virginia, Seekin' shelter from the storm.
Caught up in the fable, I watched the tower grow.
Five year plans and new deals, Wrapped in golden chains.
And I wonder, Still I wonder Who'll stop the rain.
Heard the singers playin', How we cheered for more.
The crowd had rushed together, Tryin' to keep warm.
Still the rain kept pourin', Fallin' on my ears.
And I wonder, Still I wonder Who'll stop the rain.
Thursday, March 18, 2010
You…
and You ever make me felt that I'm finally complete
make me feel that I’m Your soul mate
make me think this love will be forever…
then i read your email for her…
you broke me into pieces
make me feel that I’m Your soul mate
make me think this love will be forever…
then i read your email for her…
you broke me into pieces
Labels:
Capung Centil Words,
Poems,
speak out my head
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
Soul Mate and Spouse
me: Spouse
she: Soul mate
me: in relationship, replaceable,
she: adoration ever after,
me: years is not enough to understand
she: no matter what, always match “click” on you
me: just accidentally available beside you
she: out off reach but never lost her place in your heart
me: just stand in your terrace, waiting you to allow me come in your life
she: stay forever in your backyard, possessed your dream possessed your wish
me: only spouse
she: your soul mate
me: desperately care in you, both of you..
she: is my best friend ever…
me: over dose of broken heart
you: keep in silent, never care as always..
Sunday, February 28, 2010
intuitively post
this post was my first draft to writing competition part 2 at AIM, acctually i got wrong theme for that. Yep I didn't read the instruction carrefully. When Elvis repaired this task for me and told me that i'm in the wrong theme, i have no energy for made the new one to submitted for the compettion. I just tried to make it better then submitted it and then (absolutely) failed.
Yesterday when i tried to run Windows Writer Live in my laptop, this post accindentaly publish in the first draft form and in wrong blog (my other blog). The amazing things is, Diaz my friend read it and make the correct one for me!!
This is my first draft:
Smoking Children
Riva (13 years old boys) found his self becomes active smoker since he entered his junior high school. Its not surprising much since in Indonesian you can saw a group of children smoke freely in everywhere. Its true that in Indonesia culture smoke becomes a part of social habits that growth from long time a go. At that time, of course cigarette just has simple formed by leaves and tobacco, and has crucial rules as an holy part of ritual and sometimes used as a medicine, far from nowadays condition. I believe that Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect from the things that he was sent to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. I thought that he never ever imagine that once upon a time in the future, some children must sipping cigarette for entering a new social live level in their life, moreover sometimes this child smoke only to proven their adultness. Soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, smoke becomes a very large commercial product and issue.
Riva and may be so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue "SMOKING". Britannica Encyclopedia wrote that one of the greatest dangers of smoking is the increased risk of cancer, particularly lung cancer, but also cancer of the bladder, mouth, and esophagus. We can assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to the tobacco, its depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now you can imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoke at teenage ages.
Teenagers start they experience by imitating their surrounding. Because of no one in Indonesia care about how to banning they self for smoke in public area, smoke turn to the one of the things that children can easily imitated just by seeing. Following this smoke habits its easier as act as their parents smoke attitude, their friends smoke attitude and their environment smoke attitude. Well, in my opinion its certainly true that smoke becomes a smooth ways you can choose to suicide your self in a long duration without direct pain and in some way pleasing you. At the end by smoke in public space you teach children all over the world to suicide they self without know it at all and some how proud of it.
this is what dias said in my others blog:
Dias Kazuma has left a new comment on your post "Smoking Children":
Boleh gw ralat ga Ma? Bukan bermaksud menggurui yaa, cuma ingin lu jadi lebih baik lagi ^_^
Yg gw Capslock itu yg gw ralat..
Riva (13 years old boys) found HIMSELF (i rather use AS AN then becomes) becomes active smoker since he entered his junior high school. Its not VERY surprising (delete MUCH) since in (INDONESIA, Indonesian is refered to the people) you can SEE a group of children smoke freely ALMOST everywhere. Its true that in Indonesia culture smoke becomes a part of social habits that GROW from A long time AGO. At that time, (delete of course) cigarette (delete just has simple form) MADE FROM leaves and tobacco, and has crucial rules as A holy part of ritual and sometimes used as a medicine, far from nowadays condition. I believe that Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect OF the things that he (delete was sent) SEND to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. I THINK that he WOULD never ever imagine that (once upon a time is referred to the past, Ema ^_^) ONE DAY in the future, some children must sipping cigarette TO BE ABLE TO ENTER a new social live level in their life, moreover sometimes this CHILDREN smoke only to proven their adultness. AS soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, CIGARETTE BECAME a very large commercial product and issue.
Riva and maybe so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue "SMOKING". Britannica Encyclopedia wrote that one of the greatest dangers of smoking is the increased risk of cancer, particularly lung cancer, but also cancer of the bladder, mouth, and esophagus. We can assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to the tobacco, its depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now you can imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoke at TEEN ages.
Teenagers start they experience by imitating their surrounding. Because of no one in Indonesia care about how to BAN THEM self for smoke in public area, SMOKING TURNS INTO (delete the) one of the things that children can easily IMITATE just by seeing. Following this smoke habits its easier as act as their parents smoke attitude, their friends smoke attitude and their environment smoke attitude 9(kalimat ini perlu diperbaiki Ma, gw susah memahaminya). Well, in my opinion its certainly true that SMOKING, (smoke referred to the noun (cigarrete)) becomes a smooth ways you can choose to KILL your self in a long duration without direct pain and in some way pleasing you. At the end by SMOKING in public space you teach children all over the world to KILL THEM self without KNOWING it at all and some how proud of it.
Cuma ingin sekedar membantu ^_^
Koreksi gw juga mungkin masih perlu dikoreksi
^_^
Posted by Dias Kazuma to dream of ea-12h34 at February 26, 2010 9:41 PM
and this is the final draft that i send to Ian 2 weeks ago...
Children and Smoking
We will easy to find children smoking freely in public space all around Indonesia. There is several reasons for thus phenomena, first in Indonesia smoking turn to be social habits. Riva (13 years old boys) found himself becomes an active smoking since he he was in junior high school. It’s not surprising much since in Indonesian you can saw a group of children smoking easily everywhere. I believe long time ago, Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect from the things that he was sent to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. As soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, smoking becomes a very large commercial product and issue. I thought that he was never imagine that once upon a time in the future, some children would take sip cigarette to proof their identity and adultness in social life.
Second reason is children smoking in public area because they imitating their surrounding. Since no one in Indonesia care about banning smoking in public area, smoking easier to be duplicate by youth generations. They only need to act like their parents smoking attitude, or their friends smoking attitude and then they will do it in a group without feeling guilty in every place. Riva and may be so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue “SMOKING”.
In my opinion, smoking is the best way you can choose if you want to kill your self slowly, without direct pain and in some way pleas you. Let assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to tobacco, it depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now please imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoking at teenage ages. At the end without banning your self to smoking in public area, you engage to teach children all over the world to commit suicide insensibly and some how proud of it.
*thanks for dias :)
Yesterday when i tried to run Windows Writer Live in my laptop, this post accindentaly publish in the first draft form and in wrong blog (my other blog). The amazing things is, Diaz my friend read it and make the correct one for me!!
This is my first draft:
Smoking Children
Riva (13 years old boys) found his self becomes active smoker since he entered his junior high school. Its not surprising much since in Indonesian you can saw a group of children smoke freely in everywhere. Its true that in Indonesia culture smoke becomes a part of social habits that growth from long time a go. At that time, of course cigarette just has simple formed by leaves and tobacco, and has crucial rules as an holy part of ritual and sometimes used as a medicine, far from nowadays condition. I believe that Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect from the things that he was sent to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. I thought that he never ever imagine that once upon a time in the future, some children must sipping cigarette for entering a new social live level in their life, moreover sometimes this child smoke only to proven their adultness. Soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, smoke becomes a very large commercial product and issue.
Riva and may be so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue "SMOKING". Britannica Encyclopedia wrote that one of the greatest dangers of smoking is the increased risk of cancer, particularly lung cancer, but also cancer of the bladder, mouth, and esophagus. We can assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to the tobacco, its depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now you can imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoke at teenage ages.
Teenagers start they experience by imitating their surrounding. Because of no one in Indonesia care about how to banning they self for smoke in public area, smoke turn to the one of the things that children can easily imitated just by seeing. Following this smoke habits its easier as act as their parents smoke attitude, their friends smoke attitude and their environment smoke attitude. Well, in my opinion its certainly true that smoke becomes a smooth ways you can choose to suicide your self in a long duration without direct pain and in some way pleasing you. At the end by smoke in public space you teach children all over the world to suicide they self without know it at all and some how proud of it.
this is what dias said in my others blog:
Dias Kazuma has left a new comment on your post "Smoking Children":
Boleh gw ralat ga Ma? Bukan bermaksud menggurui yaa, cuma ingin lu jadi lebih baik lagi ^_^
Yg gw Capslock itu yg gw ralat..
Riva (13 years old boys) found HIMSELF (i rather use AS AN then becomes) becomes active smoker since he entered his junior high school. Its not VERY surprising (delete MUCH) since in (INDONESIA, Indonesian is refered to the people) you can SEE a group of children smoke freely ALMOST everywhere. Its true that in Indonesia culture smoke becomes a part of social habits that GROW from A long time AGO. At that time, (delete of course) cigarette (delete just has simple form) MADE FROM leaves and tobacco, and has crucial rules as A holy part of ritual and sometimes used as a medicine, far from nowadays condition. I believe that Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect OF the things that he (delete was sent) SEND to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. I THINK that he WOULD never ever imagine that (once upon a time is referred to the past, Ema ^_^) ONE DAY in the future, some children must sipping cigarette TO BE ABLE TO ENTER a new social live level in their life, moreover sometimes this CHILDREN smoke only to proven their adultness. AS soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, CIGARETTE BECAME a very large commercial product and issue.
Riva and maybe so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue "SMOKING". Britannica Encyclopedia wrote that one of the greatest dangers of smoking is the increased risk of cancer, particularly lung cancer, but also cancer of the bladder, mouth, and esophagus. We can assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to the tobacco, its depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now you can imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoke at TEEN ages.
Teenagers start they experience by imitating their surrounding. Because of no one in Indonesia care about how to BAN THEM self for smoke in public area, SMOKING TURNS INTO (delete the) one of the things that children can easily IMITATE just by seeing. Following this smoke habits its easier as act as their parents smoke attitude, their friends smoke attitude and their environment smoke attitude 9(kalimat ini perlu diperbaiki Ma, gw susah memahaminya). Well, in my opinion its certainly true that SMOKING, (smoke referred to the noun (cigarrete)) becomes a smooth ways you can choose to KILL your self in a long duration without direct pain and in some way pleasing you. At the end by SMOKING in public space you teach children all over the world to KILL THEM self without KNOWING it at all and some how proud of it.
Cuma ingin sekedar membantu ^_^
Koreksi gw juga mungkin masih perlu dikoreksi
^_^
Posted by Dias Kazuma to dream of ea-12h34 at February 26, 2010 9:41 PM
and this is the final draft that i send to Ian 2 weeks ago...
Children and Smoking
We will easy to find children smoking freely in public space all around Indonesia. There is several reasons for thus phenomena, first in Indonesia smoking turn to be social habits. Riva (13 years old boys) found himself becomes an active smoking since he he was in junior high school. It’s not surprising much since in Indonesian you can saw a group of children smoking easily everywhere. I believe long time ago, Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect from the things that he was sent to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. As soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, smoking becomes a very large commercial product and issue. I thought that he was never imagine that once upon a time in the future, some children would take sip cigarette to proof their identity and adultness in social life.
Second reason is children smoking in public area because they imitating their surrounding. Since no one in Indonesia care about banning smoking in public area, smoking easier to be duplicate by youth generations. They only need to act like their parents smoking attitude, or their friends smoking attitude and then they will do it in a group without feeling guilty in every place. Riva and may be so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue “SMOKING”.
In my opinion, smoking is the best way you can choose if you want to kill your self slowly, without direct pain and in some way pleas you. Let assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to tobacco, it depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now please imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoking at teenage ages. At the end without banning your self to smoking in public area, you engage to teach children all over the world to commit suicide insensibly and some how proud of it.
*thanks for dias :)
Friday, February 12, 2010
L.O.V.E
in the name of love
we decided to let all those feelings bind us
step by step
we still go on
all wobbly steps
creating crunchy sounds
tears, pebble, rose, tissue, chocolate, aspirin
hugs, kisses
we found our self laughing in this pain
lost in blindness
and then
in the name of love
i know i push u to beloved
i let my heart to deal with it
and in the name of love
lets love, love its self
lets wait this whole feelings lost its strenght
couple of heart have no objection for whatever its take
valentine 2010*
*dedicated to shane who gives the idea, "poem for valentine?" :D
picture taken from http://mylife-mythings.blogspot.com/2009/07/month-of-love.html
we decided to let all those feelings bind us
step by step
we still go on
all wobbly steps
creating crunchy sounds
tears, pebble, rose, tissue, chocolate, aspirin
hugs, kisses
we found our self laughing in this pain
lost in blindness
and then
in the name of love
i know i push u to beloved
i let my heart to deal with it
and in the name of love
lets love, love its self
lets wait this whole feelings lost its strenght
couple of heart have no objection for whatever its take
valentine 2010*
*dedicated to shane who gives the idea, "poem for valentine?" :D
picture taken from http://mylife-mythings.blogspot.com/2009/07/month-of-love.html
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