Thursday, April 22, 2010

My Day's

17 April 2010

Wednesday, March 31, 2010

Welcoming April

I'm welcoming April with all it's blessing days

to make my age shine in silver glow...

Monday, March 22, 2010

Sing a long...



Who'll Stop The Rain


Artist/Band:  Creedence Clearwater Revival
Album: Cosmo's Factory

Long as I remember The rain been comin' down.
Clouds of myst'ry pourin' Confusion on the ground.
Good men through the ages, Tryin' to find the sun;

And I wonder, Still I wonder, Who'll stop the rain.

I went down Virginia, Seekin' shelter from the storm.
Caught up in the fable, I watched the tower grow.
Five year plans and new deals, Wrapped in golden chains.

And I wonder, Still I wonder Who'll stop the rain.

Heard the singers playin', How we cheered for more.
The crowd had rushed together, Tryin' to keep warm.
Still the rain kept pourin', Fallin' on my ears.

And I wonder, Still I wonder Who'll stop the rain.

Thursday, March 18, 2010

You…

and You ever make me felt that I'm finally complete
make me feel that I’m Your soul mate
make me think this love will be forever…

then i read your email for her…
you broke me into pieces

Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Soul Mate and Spouse


me: Spouse
she: Soul mate

me: in relationship, replaceable,
she: adoration ever after,

me: years is not enough to understand
she: no matter what, always match “click” on you

me: just accidentally available beside you
she: out off reach but never lost her place in your heart

me: just stand in your terrace, waiting you to allow me come in your life
she: stay forever in your backyard, possessed your dream possessed your wish

me: only spouse
she: your soul mate

me: desperately care in you, both of you..
she: is my best friend ever…

me: over dose of broken heart
you: keep in silent, never care as always..

Sunday, February 28, 2010

intuitively post

this post was my first draft to writing competition part 2 at AIM, acctually i got wrong theme for that. Yep I didn't read the instruction carrefully. When Elvis repaired this task for me and told me that i'm in the wrong theme, i have no energy for made the new one to submitted for the compettion.  I just tried to make it better then submitted it and then (absolutely) failed.


Yesterday when i tried to run Windows Writer Live in my laptop, this post accindentaly publish in the first draft form and in wrong blog (my other blog). The amazing things is, Diaz my friend read it and make the correct one for me!!

This is my first draft:


Smoking Children


Riva (13 years old boys) found his self becomes active smoker since he entered his junior high school. Its not surprising much since in Indonesian you can saw a group of children smoke freely in everywhere. Its true that in Indonesia culture smoke becomes a part of social habits that growth from  long time a go. At that time, of course cigarette just has simple formed by leaves and tobacco, and has crucial rules as an holy part of ritual and sometimes used as a medicine, far from nowadays condition. I believe that Jean Nicot  never thought about the large effect from the things that he was sent to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. I thought that he never ever imagine that once upon a time in the future, some children must  sipping cigarette for entering a new social live level in their life, moreover sometimes this child smoke only to proven their adultness. Soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, smoke becomes a very large commercial product and issue. 

Riva and may be so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue "SMOKING". Britannica Encyclopedia wrote that one of the greatest dangers of smoking is the increased risk of cancer, particularly lung cancer, but also cancer of the bladder, mouth, and esophagus. We can assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to the tobacco, its depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now you can imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoke at teenage ages.

Teenagers start they experience by imitating their surrounding. Because of no one in Indonesia care about how to banning they self for smoke in public area, smoke turn to the one of the things that children can easily imitated just by seeing. Following this smoke habits its easier as act as their parents smoke attitude, their friends smoke attitude and their environment smoke attitude.  Well, in my opinion its certainly true that smoke becomes a smooth ways you can choose  to suicide your self in a long duration without direct pain and in some way pleasing you. At the end by smoke in public space you teach children all over the world to suicide they self without know it at all and some how proud of it.

this is what dias said in my others blog:


Dias Kazuma has left a new comment on your post "Smoking Children":

Boleh gw ralat ga Ma? Bukan bermaksud menggurui yaa, cuma ingin lu jadi lebih baik lagi ^_^

Yg gw Capslock itu yg gw ralat..

Riva (13 years old boys) found HIMSELF (i rather use AS AN then becomes) becomes active smoker since he entered his junior high school. Its not VERY surprising (delete MUCH) since in (INDONESIA, Indonesian is refered to the people) you can SEE a group of children smoke freely ALMOST everywhere. Its true that in Indonesia culture smoke becomes a part of social habits that GROW from A long time AGO. At that time, (delete of course) cigarette (delete just has simple form) MADE FROM leaves and tobacco, and has crucial rules as A holy part of ritual and sometimes used as a medicine, far from nowadays condition. I believe that Jean Nicot never thought about the large effect OF the things that he (delete was sent) SEND to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. I THINK that he WOULD never ever imagine that (once upon a time is referred to the past, Ema ^_^) ONE DAY in the future, some children must sipping cigarette TO BE ABLE TO ENTER a new social live level in their life, moreover sometimes this CHILDREN smoke only to proven their adultness. AS soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, CIGARETTE BECAME a very large commercial product and issue.

Riva and maybe so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue "SMOKING". Britannica Encyclopedia wrote that one of the greatest dangers of smoking is the increased risk of cancer, particularly lung cancer, but also cancer of the bladder, mouth, and esophagus. We can assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to the tobacco, its depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now you can imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoke at TEEN ages.

Teenagers start they experience by imitating their surrounding. Because of no one in Indonesia care about how to BAN THEM self for smoke in public area, SMOKING TURNS INTO (delete the) one of the things that children can easily IMITATE just by seeing. Following this smoke habits its easier as act as their parents smoke attitude, their friends smoke attitude and their environment smoke attitude 9(kalimat ini perlu diperbaiki Ma, gw susah memahaminya). Well, in my opinion its certainly true that SMOKING, (smoke referred to the noun (cigarrete)) becomes a smooth ways you can choose to KILL your self in a long duration without direct pain and in some way pleasing you. At the end by SMOKING in public space you teach children all over the world to KILL THEM self without KNOWING it at all and some how proud of it.

Cuma ingin sekedar membantu ^_^

Koreksi gw juga mungkin masih perlu dikoreksi

^_^

Posted by Dias Kazuma to dream of ea-12h34 at February 26, 2010 9:41 PM 


and this is the final draft that i send to Ian 2 weeks ago...

Children and Smoking


We will easy to find children smoking freely in public space all around Indonesia. There is several reasons for thus phenomena, first in Indonesia smoking turn to be social habits. Riva (13 years old boys) found himself becomes an active smoking since he he was in junior high school. It’s not surprising much since in Indonesian you can saw a group of children smoking easily everywhere.  I believe long time ago, Jean Nicot  never thought about the large effect from the things that he was sent to the King of French at 1959: Tobacco. As soon as The French King spread tobacco to the rest of Europe, smoking becomes a very large commercial product and issue. I thought that he was never imagine that once upon a time in the future, some children would take sip cigarette to proof their identity and adultness in social life. 

Second reason is children smoking in public area because they imitating their surrounding. Since no one in Indonesia care about banning smoking in public area, smoking easier to be duplicate by youth generations. They only need to act like  their parents smoking attitude, or their friends smoking attitude and then they will do it in a group without feeling guilty in every place.  Riva and may be so many boys at his age around the world are just one of small victim from one international health big issue “SMOKING”.

In my opinion, smoking is the best way you can choose  if you want to kill your self slowly, without direct pain and in some way pleas you. Let assumed that the risk of developing a cancer related to tobacco, it depends on how long that person has been smoking, the number of cigarettes smoked per day, the tar content of the cigarette, and how deeply the person inhales the smoke. Now please imagine the risks that haunting Indonesian youth if they started smoking at teenage ages. At the end  without banning your self to smoking in public area,  you engage to teach children all over the world to commit suicide insensibly and some how proud of it.

*thanks for dias :)

Friday, February 12, 2010

L.O.V.E

in the name of love
we decided to let all those feelings bind us

step by step
we still go on
all wobbly steps
creating crunchy sounds

tears, pebble, rose, tissue, chocolate, aspirin
hugs, kisses
we found our self laughing in this pain
lost in blindness

and then
in the name of love
i know i push u to beloved
i let my heart to deal with it

and in the name of love
lets love, love its self

lets wait this whole feelings lost its strenght
couple of heart have no objection for whatever its take

valentine 2010*

*dedicated to shane who gives the idea, "poem for valentine?" :D
picture taken from http://mylife-mythings.blogspot.com/2009/07/month-of-love.html

Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Afternoon*

When i'm old, and comforted
and done with this desire
With Memory to share my bed
And Peace to share my fire*

I'll sitting down at the balcony
watching the sun goes down like another Romeo Story
then I know, even throwing fable no longer comes
Escaping town still happening

Then Red Sun melted at my skin
Reminds me to another east summer wind
When i put off my glass shoes and run for a thousand kisses
Like Sun never goes down

Then here I'm
calm at my balcony, with a great smell hot coffee from the kitchen
my smile frozen by his eyes
The eyes that reflecting the sunset**


* from the Dorothy Parker Poem
** just another project from shane.. :) give me a comment guys..
the photo taken from adobe-photoshop-tutorial.com

Friday, January 22, 2010

i still cannot believe it but yeah i got it!

Post card form Holland

Dear Ula,

You cannot believe it, Holland is an amazing country, it has fascinating development, unique culture, and high technology. As you can see in the picture on this postcard, Holland is covered by flowers. This country also has a lot of canals with the beautiful river below. In fact, after being here for four weeks, I could not find any water in toilets around this country to wash or clean my body. Yes that is true. The first two weeks I always carry water in a bottle every time I go to the toilet.However, I have used wet tissue for two weeks recently, and I am sure that I will have used only tissue and perfume by the time I’m six month at Holland.
How could they say that their state is an under water country??
For winter, yes I’m excited on this season. So it was like a miracle when I experience my first week in Holland during the winter. But it turned to an extraordinary experience when I found my self frozen in temperature of -8 degree Celsius, without any snow around me, even just one milligrams. Yes my dear, Holland winter does not guarantee you to be able to see snow and feel the granulated snow on your skin.
Enjoy my words, see you later in another post card.

Ema  

* this story is the one that i sent to AIM StuNed writing competition and yey i got 3th place!
this competition theme : your first month at Netherlands; one of the rules: 150-250 words
thanks for Linkcon for the whole story about Hollands, and Google for make mu sure :P
and thanks for Ula, the one that come first everytime i think about postcard!

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

today

fatigue began to attack!!

Monday, January 11, 2010

what Should I Write?!

next big question come from my tutor and also my teacher at Aim, Shane.
Shane ask me about my big "contribution" for world!
what a big quetion isn't it?

oh Ok, i mean have a blog seems fun, but having blog for contributing something to the one off big issue in the world, seem so seriously!

I dont know exactly what should i write for full fill the "contributing" job!
so for this blog, i bet it will be similiar like Dream Of  Ea just a stupid words from me to comment something, gossiping some one, reviewing movies, events, books, places, everything that i'm interested much, or something that i amazed much!

so it will be just another not-important blog from me..
blog for chit chat but in english! hehhee

oke now let me shared a fairy tale that we composed together at writing class

enjoy the fable guys

The Emperor and His Daugther

The was once an old emperor who lived in ernormous, golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong. He had three beatiful daughters, but unfortunetly no son. This fat, big and stubborn King has obssession for his poor little daughters to marry a rich princes and get their money for his bankrupt emperor before he passed away and leave many debt. (me!)

He found three fat and handsome princes. But his poor little daughters didn't have any feelings with them. (Tami-Palu)

The princesses thought that all of the princes are so ugly to married with. They also arogant like their father. the fat, big and stubborn king couldn't hide his anger no more. (Japi-Kupang)

He said they must get married and take their husbands to live in his palace with them before the doughter were getting older and older. (elvis-Kupang)

However, the daughters still don't care abaout what thier father said, so one day, they run away from the palace, adn move temporary at Kung Tao Hotel in the next village. Which has a big swimming pool and internet connection. (Ridwan-Aceh)

Since they always chats at the hotel, they found a good looking macho Hollywood actor. They all in loved with hollywood actor. The first princess were couple with Tom Cruise, the second one met Mel Gibson, and the last one in loved with Will Smith. (Aan-Kalimantan)

All of them were very happy, so they called they're father and said they want maary soon. The emperor felt like a big stone comes toward him, heard about that. He said to his daughters "I want to meet them up, Bring them to the palace!!". The princess take the mans to the palace and introduced they to his father. When he saw the man, the emperoree laughed out load because that mans are the prince tha the emperor wants his children to married. (Disty-Riau)

hahahhahaaha :D great story ever guys!! so my chinesee emperor fable  become a multiculture married story in your hand!

Friday, January 8, 2010

Heyy yaa


Assalamualaikum...
This is the first post from me, to start a very long story....
Yep its will be “beating the dutch” for me, why?? Simple guys.. i never write in english before and in order to improve my writing skill, i will fulfill this blog with a thousand words in english :D
I’m in the middle of my dream journey
I’m in a learning process, a very hard learning process for me, cause its time for me to start fallin love with grammar...

if you ask me why this blog must be called "Naga Terbang Menari"
its because i love dragon fly much! and if i transleted "dragon fly" to indonesian directly, 
it will read: Naga Terbang, and when dragon, flying arround (like in old fiction story) it will seen like dancing in the sky...



So heyy yaa
Stay with me, Correct Me If I’m Wrong...


* actually this post wrote on 3 january 2010 :D my first day at Jakarta and published on 8 january 2010