Monday, January 11, 2010

what Should I Write?!

next big question come from my tutor and also my teacher at Aim, Shane.
Shane ask me about my big "contribution" for world!
what a big quetion isn't it?

oh Ok, i mean have a blog seems fun, but having blog for contributing something to the one off big issue in the world, seem so seriously!

I dont know exactly what should i write for full fill the "contributing" job!
so for this blog, i bet it will be similiar like Dream Of  Ea just a stupid words from me to comment something, gossiping some one, reviewing movies, events, books, places, everything that i'm interested much, or something that i amazed much!

so it will be just another not-important blog from me..
blog for chit chat but in english! hehhee

oke now let me shared a fairy tale that we composed together at writing class

enjoy the fable guys

The Emperor and His Daugther

The was once an old emperor who lived in ernormous, golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong. He had three beatiful daughters, but unfortunetly no son. This fat, big and stubborn King has obssession for his poor little daughters to marry a rich princes and get their money for his bankrupt emperor before he passed away and leave many debt. (me!)

He found three fat and handsome princes. But his poor little daughters didn't have any feelings with them. (Tami-Palu)

The princesses thought that all of the princes are so ugly to married with. They also arogant like their father. the fat, big and stubborn king couldn't hide his anger no more. (Japi-Kupang)

He said they must get married and take their husbands to live in his palace with them before the doughter were getting older and older. (elvis-Kupang)

However, the daughters still don't care abaout what thier father said, so one day, they run away from the palace, adn move temporary at Kung Tao Hotel in the next village. Which has a big swimming pool and internet connection. (Ridwan-Aceh)

Since they always chats at the hotel, they found a good looking macho Hollywood actor. They all in loved with hollywood actor. The first princess were couple with Tom Cruise, the second one met Mel Gibson, and the last one in loved with Will Smith. (Aan-Kalimantan)

All of them were very happy, so they called they're father and said they want maary soon. The emperor felt like a big stone comes toward him, heard about that. He said to his daughters "I want to meet them up, Bring them to the palace!!". The princess take the mans to the palace and introduced they to his father. When he saw the man, the emperoree laughed out load because that mans are the prince tha the emperor wants his children to married. (Disty-Riau)

hahahhahaaha :D great story ever guys!! so my chinesee emperor fable  become a multiculture married story in your hand!

4 comments:

-Be said...

be careful with the tenses that you use babe...
be sure that you put adv and adj in a proper place...

SEMANGKA! eh..WATERMELON!!

ea_12h34 said...

yep you rite b, its only a suicide project from my tutor with no rules about tenses hehehhe would you correct it for us?

-Be said...

sippo...
keep on trying...

Unknown said...

Wow - you even found an excellent photo to put there.
What you wrote is funny: an obsession to get money for his bankrupt empire! hahaha

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