Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Afternoon*

When i'm old, and comforted
and done with this desire
With Memory to share my bed
And Peace to share my fire*

I'll sitting down at the balcony
watching the sun goes down like another Romeo Story
then I know, even throwing fable no longer comes
Escaping town still happening

Then Red Sun melted at my skin
Reminds me to another east summer wind
When i put off my glass shoes and run for a thousand kisses
Like Sun never goes down

Then here I'm
calm at my balcony, with a great smell hot coffee from the kitchen
my smile frozen by his eyes
The eyes that reflecting the sunset**


* from the Dorothy Parker Poem
** just another project from shane.. :) give me a comment guys..
the photo taken from adobe-photoshop-tutorial.com

2 comments:

-Be said...

nice baby, nice :)
actually, literature thing does not bother about the right or wrong-tenses,
but due to your exercise in writing,
it's better for you to try using the right preposition, adjective etc in writing,
at least you'll be pro in basic...

keep on writing,
se mang ka!

ea_12h34 said...

aaaww B you're really adorable :) (its my adjective correct?) hehhee ok, because its poem so i think grammars not really need hihihi, but i promise next project it will be in a acceptable grammars (i dont promise it will be the correct one) hehehhee love youu......

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